Obedience
V
G Kilgore
Genre:
Historical Fiction,
Biblical
fiction
Date
of Publication: 4/22/17
ISBN:
154634330X
ASIN:
B072B5BNSG
Number
of pages: 352
Word
Count: 65,000
Tagline:
My father is a righteous man but I am just a man…who loves a woman
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Description:
Ham
is a man of passion and questions. He's adored his wife, Lita, since
he first saw her draped in her father's fishing nets and threatened
to leave with her if his father, Noah, didn't allow the marriage. She
becomes his greatest comfort when Ham is at odds with his father and
brothers.
When
Noah claims their God has commanded him to build an Ark to escape a
devastating flood, Ham worries about the construction stripping the
land and the community's ridicule of the family. He and Lita draw
closer together as outsiders. They're shocked when the rains come and
the entire family is forced into the Ark, along with the animals that
appeared.
Confinement
and uncertainty of fate amongst the refugees exaggerate normal family
tension, rivalries and forbidden love. On land, they reject efforts
to reestablish traditions, feeling independent and invincible, as
those chosen by their God to survive and thrive. But for Ham, there's
tragedy and more doubt.
Noah
warns him he must yield his will, lest there be even graver
consequences. Ham can't imagine anything worse and careens down the
path that forever links him with depravity and harsh judgment.
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Excerpt:
The
small caravan wended its way from the site of the Ark and family home
to the fishing village down the hill and to the shore.
Ham
squinted into the early morning sunlight and noted again how barren
the land was. This path used to cut through a large meadow,
embroidered by great trees in the distance and a riot of color from
the yellow and green grasses and its mixed bouquet of wildflowers.
Now it was brown, rocky and rutted.
He
walked beside the small, shaggy burro carrying his wife, Lita,
ensuring the animal did not step in the ruts or holes in its path.
Its burden was his joy.
He
smiled up at her and she returned it, placing a hand on the side of
his face. On previous jaunts that might have signaled to him that
they should detour across the meadow for a tryst amongst the trees,
but there were no more love nests on the stark plain, nor were they
alone.
"Little
Brother," Japheth called back to him, "if you can stop
staring at your woman, we have plans to make." At the foot of
the hill, the air carried a hint of the ocean and sound changed,
volatile waves winning out over the chirping birds of the fields for
dominance.
Lita
felt the familiar surge throughout her body as she neared her natural
habitat. The sea stretched before her like mother's arms, opened wide
to welcome back a wandering child. She closed her eyes and licked her
lips for the salty taste of home.
She
felt Ham's calloused hands on her own as he passed her mount's tether
to her and looked into his winking grin. "I will see you back at
home," he said with the combination of promise and hope that
made her feel so adored. She smiled in answer and continued riding
straight with Namaah’s serving maid, Sar, whom Ham had insisted
escort Lita, because the barren land was not as safe as a rich and
fertile one had been. He knew the women were friends and it was not a
trial for them to travel together. They both had knives and knew how
to use them. He and Japheth diverged left to the village.
A
frisky breeze traveling before them blew into the open tents and
caused the tops to billow out, resembling mushroom caps, as they
approached the market center.
"Let
us stop in here for a moment," Japheth suggested, his eyes
swaying uncontrollably to the wooden cottage on their right, from
which came raucous laughter and the heady aroma of burning plants.
From the open doorway could be seen men sitting in a circle, in the
middle of which were small sticks and pebbles and piles of coins.
Ham
shook his head and attempted to pull his brother away from the
gamblers. "There is only trouble for you in that place. Remember
last time?"
"Japheth!"
called a feminine voice from the trouble house. He stopped and
turned. A woman leaned against the doorway, her loose robe barely
draping her shoulders or covering her feet. Rings sparkled on her
toes and on the finger she crooked to beckon Noah's notorious son. He
shrugged off Ham's hold on him and headed back to the den of sin.
"Japheth!"
Ham shouted futilely. Their father's favorite and closest resemblance
turned, walking backwards to the door where the woman and gamers
awaited him.
"You
know me, Little Brother," he sang out with his mischievous smile
and tortoise shell eyes twinkling. "I can resist everything but
temptation. I will meet you at the silver monger’s."
Ham
threw up his arms in disgust and continued to the vendors' tents,
following the smell of sweet spices and increasingly rare flowers, to
choose some oils as a present for Lita.
***
In
the home of her parents she made one more entreaty for them to join
in the Ark project.
"Noah
is a fool," her father, Eliakim, said laughing. "What does
a farmer know of building a boat? I live on the water. There is no
sign of the great rain that he predicts."
She
looked out the narrow window of the small beach hut to view the
greyness of the sea. The meager sun seemed to dull on its surface,
like slate, rather than reflecting off of it, as she had always
known, to make the water a dazzling jewel. Something was changing.
Whether it was the prediction of her father-in-law or just nature
reacting to the stripping of the land, as Ham suspected, things were
different.
"Please,
Father," she cajoled, helping her mother serve him his mid-day
meal of fish and bread, "Come back with me. Help finish the
boat. I cannot bear the thought of what might happen to you and
Mother."
Eliakim
smiled and placed his hand on the top of her head. "Nothing will
happen to us, my dear daughter. When everyone sees how much they have
given up to Noah, how little food they have from the land, they will
all turn to me for my catch." The smile graduated to a
self-satisfied chuckle. "Then we shall see which father allowed
his child to marry beneath her house."
***
Ham
lowered his head, thoughts of Lita bringing warmth to him, as the Ark
became visible with the day's last light. As much as he had resented
it over the years, its appearance represented home, family, wife. He
hastened his step, eager to see her.
"Think
of it," Japheth reminded him. "Your one act of defying our
father's wishes gave you her. What might you have if you did it more
often?"
Ham
grinned. It was impossible to stay angry at his brother. He threw his
arm around him to hurry them back to the Ark and the thatch cottage
where their women waited.
Behind
them, thieves lay in wait for victims...marketers prepared their
wares for the next sale...carousers sinned and families settled in
for the night. None knew they were doomed.
About
the Author:
V.
G. Kilgore's father suggested she write a bible story about family,
though the finished product wasn't exactly what he had in mind. She
consulted biblical and rabbinical texts and people of different
religions about Ark legends and teachings, in writing a hopefully
entertaining and thought-provoking story.
A
former reporter and state bureaucrat, she spends her days at the
pool, on her laptop or on the road, and as far away from a desk as
possible.
She
lives in an empty nest in Kentucky with her husband and pit bull and
claims four children and three grands.
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